Time and time again. I do this over and over again. My mind is telling me no. But I can't stop myself. Am I that insane? Why can't I fix myself. Time and time again. Over and over again. I hurt myself. People tell me no. But I can't stop myself. I can't keep those promises. No one seems to understand. I don't even know myself. Why must I be like this? Can't I just be normal? I've given in too many times to count. I can't pick myself up. I can't fix myself. Time and time again. Over and over again. This obsession has gone too far. But I'm already too far gone, to come back. Time and time again. Over and over again.
I'm Suffocating
I'm suffocating. Your so intoxicating. Falling heels over head. Crashing to the ground. Flow threw my veins. I'm screaming louder. It's beating faster. Make me feel. Make me break. I'm suffocating. Your so intoxicating. Dying from the thought. Your love is never gonna be there. Left standing alone. No one to hold. I'm in despair. She consumes me. A heart attack. Is it ever gonna end? I can't let go. Bitter on the inside. Smiling on the outside. Tearing me up. Wanting to scream. I'm suffocating. Your so intoxicating. Shattered. Scattered. I can't let go. Crashing to the ground. Making me break.
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Re:just some poems.
Date: 2008/05/11 04:09
By: Psykonaught
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I like the way the lines are very short and bitter. It is effective. However, it might be an idea to slice up the block of text, use stanzas, and maybe try to combine two shorter lines into one loner line. Look! A Contortionist made of glass!
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Re:just some poems.
Date: 2008/05/11 07:22
By: biteme56
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Thanks for the advice .
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