Wayfaerer

Once more I return to this dark tome.
Images form and disintegrate in a nebulous cloud,
Far flung echoes of strange bestial noises,
I am transported to another place.

Flashes of light,
Distant thunder rumbles,
Far off in the valley of Titan.

Bloodthirsty giants wander the warpath,
Ancient armies do bloody battle,
Not noticing this lone shadow,
This ethereal shade,
Shimmering on the edge of reality.

Millennia pass and still I wander,
Surveying a thousand races
Building their precious sand castles.
Watching as they are washed away
By the tides of time.

Cries of outrage,
Pleas to impotent gods
Seas of tears and blood,
Follow in my wake.

For aeons I have walked this path,
And forever more I shall,
Until the universe falls,
And time ends,
I shall always be
The Wayfaerer.



Any comments would be appreciated

This is really good...Definitely a unique expression and really captivating

the form is nice... but rather cliche....
and i cant quite tell what its about.....
what IS it about?

It is meant to be about a time traveler haha. Thanks for the comment

Thank you very much

This is really good

Thankyou

Your imagery was vivid and evoking, with an interesting twist on subject content. Lolz, super job.

Thankyou very much

first off it is an amazing poem


crispyfooshizzle13 wrote:

QUOTE:
the form is nice... but rather cliche....
and i cant quite tell what its about.....
what IS it about?
:blink:

and second crispyfooshizzle13 it is pretty easy to figure out you obviosly just expect the poem to be forthright with its topic poetry is deeper then that so take a closer look... neway its great