okay I wrote this poem about this guy that I thought I was in love with so.............



Forever by Me
A Razor's Edge can take this pain away,
And Forever closed my weary eyes will lay.
My blood will spill out and stain my pillow case,
And I will be forever gone from this god-foresaken place.

A bullet to the head can take away this hate,
And forever they will be guilty of my wretched fate.
Once the shot is fired all my vital signs will fail,
As I walk the path away from here to forever rot in hell.

A knife into my heart can make my dreams come true,
So I will forever be free of my love for you.
Once I am lifeless you will never think of me,
And maybe that is how it should forever ever be

But a simple act of loving can change my stubborn mind,
From this forever act that seems so pre-defined.
Can you find it in your heart to love someone such as me?
I shall forever wait and maybe I will see.

to turn your sadness into joy,
someone will call you their little boy,
just wait for a little while,
someone will make you smile,
just to give you a bit of glee,
i'd happily say let it be me.

very sad poem.
talk 2 someone for gods sake!

dude!!! thats a nice poem!!!(im not emo) hey im gonna send you alittle connection thingie alright??? i'd lyk to get to noe you!!! and i aint one of those freaks neither so dont get it twisted!!!

Great poem
Luv It!!!

It's a nicely written poem, but I wouldn't give it to him, it might scare him off.

And as for it being emo, I hope that means this is just an expression of emotions that isn't mean to be taken literally